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KÔÀÆ-`m-h-\-I-fp-WÀ¯nb
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BÀ¡pw tXm¶n-sb¶p hcn-Ã...
F¦nepw
Ime-¯n-\-¸p-d¯v
sshIn-bm-sW-¦nepw
taml§fpw സ്വപ്നങ്ങളുണ്ടായിരുന്ന ,
tNmcbpw Poh-\p-apണ്ടാ--bn-cp¶
]qhp-I-fm-bn-cp-s¶¶ km£y-s¸-Sp-¯-ep-I-fp-m-hpw.
HmÀ½-bnse ]qhp-IÄ
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hcq....
\ap-s¡m-cn-¡Â IqSn
A]-cn-Nn-X-cm-Imw.....
It is really a nice poem, Congrats
ReplyDeleteI liked the lines..Varoo Namukku Aparichithar Aakaam
ReplyDeleteAll the best
Devadasan
thank you..
ReplyDeleteexpecting more opinions and suggetions and also corrections...
oru kanakkinu eppozhum aparichitharaakunnathaanu nallath..parichitharaayi piriyumbozhulla vedhana undavillallo....
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